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Speaking Of Round Numbers

Congratulations to Steven Cloud for hitting strip number 700 over at Boy On A Stick And Slither. If you like the strip, check out the BOASAS hankies (they have really excellent embroidery, and Slither has done a fine job cleaning my glasses).

The auction I mentioned yesterday to benefit Paul Taylor is larger than I reported. There’s lots of stuff up for grabs to help defray the costs of caring for Taylor’s newborn son, so go check it out. If you’re ever in serious difficulties in life, I suggest you become a webcartoonist and join Blank Label, ’cause they take care of their own.

New review of A History of Webcomics coming soon from Digital Strips. Despite a desire to make us his arch nemesis (nemeses?), we at Fleen would like to assure The Midnight Cartooner that we did not kill his father. He was totally like that when we found him.

And showing us all that he belongs on the comics page (have you written your letter yet?) just as much as Lynn Johnston, Rich Stevens brings the blink to today’s Diesel Sweeties. Homage? Or blatant attack on a sweet Canadian lady? You be the judge.

All The News That Fits

News roundup from the world of webcomics, kiddies! Keep those press releases, announcements, and suchlike coming through the contact page.

Item! Fleen fave Alien Loves Predator celebrates 200 strips by switching to a twice a week schedule. Bernie Hou, chronicler of the soul of New York City, tells all:

Here we are, episode #200, and what better way to mark the occasion by announcing something crazy that I’m unprepared to do. Starting this week I’ll be posting two new comics per week instead of one. This week, the next update will be on Friday, and then Tuesdays and Fridays thereafter. I figure most of the new comics will be the old-school, shorter 3-panellers that you enjoyed through the first year for about 130 episodes, but for those of you who dig the full-page pieces of the last year, I’ll probably do some o’ those once in a while. All depends on what mood I’m in.

We at Fleen sincerely hope that Hou is frequently in a good mood, ’cause those full-page pieces rock. Especially when he channels Chuck Jones.

Item! Alex [redacted: see posting from 17 March 2010] informs us:

I’m not sure if you do this kind of thing, it is definitely a “shameless press release.” I just started a webcomic, Monkeys In Orbit. It’s about two monkeys that get stranded in space during the space race of the 50’s and 60’s. It’s in the prologue stage right now, but it would be really cool if you checked it out. I hope you like it!

Alex, it’s most definitely the sort of thing we do, at least since we rededicated ourselves to it last week. We’re a bit late running your release, but that just means that people will have more strips to enjoy when they click over. The story starts in the depths of WWII, and the art reminds me of Wang Xuanming (which, as far as I’m concerned, is a very good thing). Alex has had a few delays, but will be kicking the strip back into production this week, which can only mean more monkeys. If you can’t get enough of space, monkeys, space monkeys, or backwards “R”s and “N”s, check out Monkeys In Orbit!

Item! Speaking of those space monkeys, Alex Jeffries fills us in more about its collective:

The Chameleon Collective is now fortified with even more essential webcomics, welcoming newcomer Steamed Carrot and Running in the Halls to an already hilarious line-up of Awesome Burger (a new project from the creator of the Sordid Affairs), It’s Not Abuse It’s Love and from the creator of Hell Ain’t So Bad, Monkeys in Orbit.

This former-triumvirate now pentarchy plans to flex its newfound power and return to its roots! That’s right. We aim, once again, to connect more fully with the fans and provide a greater experience. Expect an overload of contests and collaborations.

The doors are definitely open to other eager artists who wish to join up! We look forward to the future (it’s rather hard to look back on the future…) and what it will bring our members. I imagine it’ll be pretty fun.

Item! Darren J. Gendron likes pirates!

To properly celebrate International Talk Like a Pirate Day, Dear Pirate is running a special double issue today, featuring the secret Pirate Alphabet.

Item! David Willis is takin’ care of his Blank Label-mate, Paul Taylor in style. Bid on a piece of webcomics history and help out a little guy that needs it all at the same time.

Item! Speaking of Blank Label, {K|Ch}risto{ph|f}er Straub reports that next week you should be able to grab a Starslip Crisis mini-book.

And Item! Fleen congratulates Christopher Wright on beating the unemployment bugaboo. Today he goes back to work, stickin’ it to The Man. As we all know, The Man is very stickable.

From My Email Outbox

Date: 17 Sept 2006
From: Gary Tyrrell
To: _______, Features Editor

Subject: Comics page

Dear Mr. ________,

I’m writing today, as I have in the past, to discuss the status of the ________’s comics page. I’ve been reading the comics in ______ (and before that, in _______) since I was about three years old; call it 35 years now. I’m a fan of the American newspaper comic strip, but the artform is in trouble.

You have 17 strips, including Doonesbury, which runs on the Op-Ed page. The very youngest of them, Grand Avenue, is eight years old; only four strips are less than 20 years old. The mean age of your comic strips is 35.4 years, and the median (half of your strips are younger, half older) is 33 years. Half the strips you carry are no longer written or drawn by their creators, but rather by committees hired by the syndicates, or by no-talent children of the original creators.

Only two (Doonesbury and For Better or For Worse) feature any degree of change or growth; coincidentally, they are the two best strips you carry. The rest carry on, year after year, with the same jokes, the same plotlines and situations, the same devotion of a week’s worth of strips to the theme of “golf” each Spring and Autumn. At least Peanuts has the good grace to be in actual reruns; the others just act like it.

Put bluntly, your comics page has needed a revamp for a considerable time; happily enough, you have the opportunity do so within the framework of a situation that will present itself in the coming months:

Lynn Johnston, creator of For Better or For Worse, will be retiring her strip in 2007 when her current contract expires. This will leave at least one spot open on the page for a new strip, and hopefully more. For instance, does anybody buy the paper specifically to read Hagar, Ziggy, or Hi & Lois? Many probably find them an inoffensive, familiar presence, but does anybody actually set out to read them? There’s only one way to find out — bring in something new.

On January 8th, 2007, United Feature Syndicate will begin to distribute Diesel Sweeties by Rich Stevens. It’s an established strip, distributed online by Stevens, with a world-wide audience. By the terms of his contract, Stevens will continue to produce the online version of Diesel Sweeties in addition to the newspaper version, which sounds like an incentive for the online readers — a loyal audience — to find out what they’re missing in the newspapers.

Diesel Sweeties is, in stark contrast to nearly everything on the comics page, modern and funny. It will probably annoy people who have been reading “placeholder” strips every day of their lives and don’t want to read anything that’s different from their expectations. This is not necessarily a bad thing.

Every year, I see dire reports about how newspapers are in trouble and national readership is shrinking. Every year it becomes apparent that more older readers are dying than younger readers are picking up the paper. The comics page is where young people learn to read the newspaper, and yet those potential readers are provided with strips that are literally unchanged since their grandparents started reading. What possible incentive could anyone younger than me have to start reading your comics page?

Please contact United Feature Syndicate and request the sample strips of Diesel Sweeties. Please take Lynn Johnston’s upcoming retirement as an opportunity not just to get in on the ground floor of a new strip with a built-in audience, but to look at who your current strips are serving. Please take this chance to build your audience by serving the needs of the comics readers of today and tomorrow, not decades past.

I would be happy to discuss this matter with you further at your convenience.

Gary Tyrrell
_______, NJ

Editor’s note: I’ll let you know what response, if any, I receive.

Paul Southworth Is Disturbed For Your Amusement So Get With The Program And Be Amused, Dammit

So in case you hadn’t noticed, Paul Southworth’s Ugly Hill is back from a month-long hiatus to work on various projects and deal with some personal issues. One of those projects was a site redesign, making Ugly Hill look like a cheesy, semi-professionally designed site for Anytown, USA. Ah, satire, your name is monsters.

Another one of those projects was shown to us the week of 4 September, featuring both pencils, and finished art for a twisted, unnamed snippet of squirrel-murder. I got curious, so I asked Southworth what the deal was.

Turns out, it’s called “Petwood”, and you could best describe it as a combo-platter of Heathcliff and Pet Sematary; ironically, neither of those things is very good, but Petwood struck me as funny and intriguing. I want to read more of it. Here’s Southworth:

It’s about these three dead pets: Blank, Blue, and Slog … we follow the adventures of these three undead pets around their neighborhood, interacting with other local live animals and trying to figure out why they became zombies in the first place.

It was conceived as a pitch to Image comics, but certain events in my life have kind of put it on the back burner again. I hope to return to it soon, because I think it’s a pretty good idea that I’d really like to do something with. Here’s a preliminary sketch of the cat character, Blue, who wasn’t seen in the first few pages.

He starts off as a normal cat in the story, but gets half his head bitten off by the goldfish and becomes a zombie. Also, the goldfish is mute and is so fat that he has to get pulled around in a little red wagon, and the main villian is a voodoo parrot. I hope to finish the pitch soon and send it off to Image (or whomever will publish it).

Given that Image should already be familiar with the quality of Southworth’s work via the Tales By Tavernlight backup stories in the print version of PvP, they dang well oughta take a chance on Petwood. And if they do, be sure to buy it, ’cause it looks hi-larious.

Editor’s note: The new PvP site doesn’t have the TBT strips that Southworth worked on yet; Scott Kurtz has kindly offered to make ’em available as soon as he’s over the nasty bug he’s fighting, so come back here in a couple of days to see some full-size Southworth goodness.

Das Freshmacher

So I was walking to work in the rain this morning, the sort of rain that you only get in New York City. Rain that’s so fine and insubstantial that it doesn’t have the good grace to fall towards the ground, but instead gets lofted by the slightest of breezes and deposits more on the insides of your glasses than the outside. But in one of those turns of fortune you only see in popular entertainments, I turned onto Broadway, and there was a brightly-painted moped and three guys in parkas declaring themselves the Mentos Freshness Patrol. One of them greeted me enthusiastically, reached into a messenger bag overflowing with tubes of mint Mentos, and wished me the very best of days. Now Fresh And Full Of Life, I determined to meet the rest of the day with a smile.

You know that saying about how a smile is the best umbrella? Total crapola. But I did get inspired to think about how I could make other things around me a little Fresher, and Fleen is at the top of the list. Things have gotten a little stale around here; although we’ve done some of our best pieces recently (I’m especially proud of the Webcomics School writeups), the day-to-day has gotten a bit boring. Realistically, that’s going to happen from time to time; when life hands you a dead computer, sick parents, a move to another country, or re-enrollment in college for the first time since grad school (all of which have happened in the last few weeks here at Fleen Central), time becomes precious.

And when time gets tight, you reach for what’s familiar, stop looking as far afield for new strips, put things off in favor of breaking news because you don’t have time to do two pieces today. Case in point, I’ve been meaning to write up a reivew of Epic Legends of the Magic Sword Kings for weeks now, but other things keep popping up. If you’ve written in to our contact address, chances are your announcement has been bumped until it’s so outdated that it’s not worth mentioning. I’m sorry for that.

So here’s what I’m gonna do: I’m going to do better. I’m going to try to pick up at least two new webcomics a month, and I’m going to try to put up a newsbox at least once a week, so send in those announcements and press releases (I can’t promise that I’ll be able to do a deep read on everything that comes in, but I’ll try to do at least a once-over). And we’re starting now. Thanks for your patience, and please continue to let us know how we’re doing; any of us can be reached at firstname @ name-of-this-here-site.

Item! Tim Demeter reports that Graphic Smash’s New Fall Season (boy, Eric Burns has a real gift for neologism, doesn’t he?) starts today, with seven new series (including Brat-Halla, via MoviePoopShoot, and Quicken Forbidden) starting in the coming days.

Item! Lea Hernandez and her family continue to rebuild their lives, but the need is still great. If you’ve ever read a comic or webcomic, see if you can’t drop a little something in the bucket. PayPal buttons here, here, here, or just about anywhere you find webcomics.

Item! Gary Chaloner has a podcast interview with Bob Andelman, author of Will Eisner: A Spirited Life, about JOHN LAW, webcomics and other Eisner-related subjects.

Item! Jennie Breeden has finished the images for her Devil’s Panties playing cards, and is waiting for the printer to have a time frame to do the job. Looks like the coolest merch of the season.

Item! Trade Loeffler has started a new comic called Zip and Li’l Bit that features some really nice art; reminds me of Jimmy Gownley’s Amelia Rules. Just 16 strips so far, but I’m digging this one.

Item! Ben Stirling has finalized the design for his webcomic, Patrick Grey; it’s been up and running since January, and seems to have settled into its groove.

Item! Mini-review of ELOTMSK — the strips don’t always date well, Krahulik’s art is just getting into its groove, and some lengthy exceprts from Holkins’ newsposts are provided. I enjoyed re-reading about Fucking Rats and Horse Chestnuts; hopefully when the next volume comes along, the saga of Carrot Cake Soup will also be reproduced in full. Read if you’re a fan, you probably won’t get the appeal if you aren’t.

And Item! Noted futurist Lore was interviewed on TV (well, basic cable) about how George Lucas hates you. While the G4 guy is no Hank Paternoster, El Sjobergo was both trenchant and witty. And if we could make Lore’s goatee the new webcomics facial-hair meme of choice instead of my moustache, I’d be grateful.

Fleen Book Corner: Making Comics

Scott McCloud is a genius; I use that word in its precise, Merriam-Webster’s sense of extraordinary intellectual power especially as manifested in creative activity, and as soon as this gets posted, I’m going to start brainstorming a way to get the terms Scott McCloud and deserves a MacArthur Fellowship into the common lexicon in the hopes that it reaches one of their nominators. If any work of creativity ever deserved widespread recognition, it’s Making Comics.

I don’t make comics; I read them and tell other people what I like. I always figured that the process of creating comics was sort of sausage-like, and that I was better off not knowing, but McCloud’s earlier works dissuaded me of that. Still, those were (repsectively) about what comics are, and what they could be, not how to make them. So when I sat down last week with MC, I wondered how much I would get it.

Answer: maybe not as much as my creator friends, but a hell of a lot more than I figured. McCloud’s accomplished two things that seem almost diametrically opposed: on the one hand he’s taken abstract, intuitive ideas and made their mechanical underpinnings clear and obvious; on the other hand, he’s taken very technical aspects and translated them into clear, plain English. He’s done it all in a self-describing structure, where every lesson is conveyed not merely by formal presentation, but by subtle example.

For instance, on page 33, he’s talking about panel layouts and making the flow of reading smooth and seamless. McCloud warns that a particular layout is dangerous — the reader doesn’t know which way to go and can miss panels or be yanked out of the story. There are ways to avoid the trap, and rather than tell us what they are, he just does them — page 33 uses the deadly panel combination, but there’s no confusion on the part of the reader. Like the storyteller he is (although he might dispute that label, see below) McCloud has opted to show, don’t tell.

The book is filled with such moments of awareness, where the reader suddenly realizes that McCloud’s been using all the techniques that he’s been talking about; we can tell what works because we know that it’s worked on us without having been hit over the head by it. The transfer of knowledge that McCloud achieves is more efficient and effective than almost anything else I’ve ever read. His love of simple, clear design is on display right from the table of contents, where each topic is listed in outline form (to show relationships) and accompanied by a small icon that expresses some part of the nature of the topic.

It’s a technique that I would have expected from Edward Tufte, and for anybody wanting to learn how to express complex structures in a straightforward manner, MC belongs on the shelf next to The Visual Display of Quantitative Information, Envisioning Information, and Visual Explanations.

What I found most striking about MC compared to the earlier books is McCloud’s treatment of webcomics, a topic near and dear to my heart. At the time of Understanding Comics, they didn’t exist (and the topic of digital tools and techniques was understandably absent); in Reinventing Comics, a fairly large firestorm kicked up, perhaps because McCloud intertwined his discussion of the evolving medium with a preference for certain economic models.

In MC, webcomics just are; they exist, they’re exploding, and any predictions McCloud might make, he acknowledges are subject to rapid aging (case in point: Rich Stevens bridging the worlds of newspaper syndication and webcomics scarcely a week prior to the book’s release).

Given McCloud’s famous ability to be able to talk and argue with anybody, no matter how vicious the difference of opinion, it’s not surprising that discussions of medium (webcomics and other new forms vs. traditional forms) are kept separate from the discussions of artistic philosophy. His now well-known “Four Tribes” model has less the here’s what’s going to happen tone that parts of RC had, and more of a here’s what I’ve noticed, and by the way, it’s a fluid situation tone.

It can still lead to some odd differences of opinion, though; McCloud places himself firmly in the Formalist camp, but I’ve been struck for 20 years more by his ability to tell a story and build characters that come alive, making him (in my eyes) more of an Animist. The lesson to be drawn, then, is that the labels shouldn’t get in the way of the work. The different approaches to making comics result in nothing more than different means to the same end. In this way, the tribes discussion (which I think everybody felt would be something of a lightning rod) hearkens back to the preface, where McCloud declares that when it comes to making comics, There are no rules. And here they are.

In all, as brilliant and well-argued (and in some places, polarizing) as UC and RC were, MC is a noticeably more mature (in the sense of well-aged, like a fine wine) work, as befits a man who draws himself a little rounder and a little grayer than he used to. Given that McCloud has stated several times that his next project will be a graphic novel of considerable length, the Comics series will likely remain a trilogy for some time. Honestly, though, it’s tough to see how there might need to be a fourth — this is a definitive work in the field, and will likely remain part of the canon for as long as there are things that we can still recognize as comics.

Editor’s note: Chapter Five of MC deals with the tools of making comics; given that certain aspects of this discussion are not easily expressed in printed form, McCloud is constructing a “Chapter 5 ½”, which should be available about this time next week. This review will be supplemented at that time, if necessary.

Fleen Book Corner: American Born Chinese

I don’t know much about Gene Yang. I know that he’s done some kickass comics (both print and online); I know that he’s married and has a child; I know that he teaches high school.

I know that however old he is, he’s way too young to have produced American Born Chinese; this is the sort of work usually appears as the capstone of a long and illustrious career. It’s simply too well-structured, too surprising, too deep, too honest to be the work of a young man. Of course, judging from available evidence, Yang is a young man, which just means that he must have a self-awareness beyond his years.

I thought I knew what I was getting in this book, since I’d read the story a page at a time on Modern Tales, and have had the mini-comics for more than a year; I didn’t know that Yang had added more than a third to the story, and what looked like three separate explorations of Chinese identity was in fact one tightly-unified tale.

And that story structure is part of what makes ABC so good. Starting from separate points, the three different storylines spiral around and tighten up, eventually merging into a coherent whole. On the one hand, we have the story of Jin, a young boy trying to fit into his white suburb; racism (both casual and overt) and ignorance drive him to try to be more like those around him, and less like the even newer kid who’s FOB (fresh off the boat) from Taiwan. It’s not quite autobiographical, and not quite fictional; it is deeply personal and affecting.

On the other hand, there’s the tale of the Monkey King, traditional hero of the classic Journey to the West; he’s powerful, arrogant, stubborn, and has some comeuppance in his future. I’ve read parts of Journey to the West (joyless translations, put together by scholars who want you to be sure you know How Important All This Is), but Yang’s version is the first that really came alive for me. This seems like the bedtime stories that mothers would tell their children, and it’s wonderful news that Yang has started a cartoon journal for the Monkey King, filling in more of his adventures. With any luck, there will be a lot of these forthcoming, and a collected volume.

On the other other hand, we have Everyone Ruvs Chin-Kee, a super econo-size bundle of poisonous stereotypes packaged as sitcom. Danny doesn’t even know how Chin-Kee is his cousin; he’s an average white kid in an average ‘burb, and if there’s any Chinese heritage in the guy, it’s a couple of generations back. But every year, this buck-toothed, pony-tailed, Confucious-quoting, R-and-L switching, kung-fu fighting (with special moves like Kung Pao Attack!, House Special Kick In Nards!, and Pimp Srap Hunan Style!) cliche comes to visit and ruins Danny’s life (with accompanying laugh track). Where Chin-Kee comes from (and more importantly, why) is what finally ties together the three threads of the story, which ends on a note of perhaps-redemption for all involved.

That feeling of redemption is pretty important, as Yang has imbued the entire story with elements of his Roman Catholic faith. I doubt the first chroniclers of the Monkey King imagined their hero and his compatriots filling the role of the Three Magi, but every generation adapts cultural touchstones for its own purposes. Sometimes it’s a dismal undertaking, but in this case, it works surprisingly well.

Lark Pien provided the colors, and they’re beautiful; from the red of the character chops that introduce each chapter, to the sickly yellow of Chin-Kee’s skin, to the deep lacquer colors of some of the traditional elements (an abacus here, a godly emissary there), the colors perfectly suit the story.

Read ABC. Then read it again, seeing how the pieces fit together. Then go get Yang’s other comics and read them, too. This is the work of a master storyteller, and you owe yourself the pleasure of reading it.

On The Road With The McClouds

So Scott McCloud and family pulled into Midtown Comics in Times Square last Friday, for the first signing of the year-long Making Comics tour. This is just the start of a long-haul marathon, so be sure to keep your eyes open for when they’ll be coming through your town. For example, McCloud will be travelling within a few miles of Fleen Central in about a month, and it’s hoped that we can get a little interview in.

In the meantime, check out the photos! A continuous line of people waited for the opportunity to buy a book, get an autograph, and thank McCloud for his creative works (look for a review in the coming day or two). McCloud and family were well-nourished with cupcakes, leading to what The Greatest Theoriest of Comics to called The Money Shot. Fleen is offering a small reward to anybody who can identify the goofball tossing ‘the horns’ there behind Winter and Sky.

Local webcomics mafiosi (the print comics folks seemed to all be in Baltimore) in attendance included (left to right) Rich Stevens, Phillip Karlsson, and Chris Hastings. Most ironic moment: an earnest young man was speaking excitedly to McCloud about micropayments in the world of Korean on-line games; McCloud then looked up to see that the next person in line was a demonically-grinning Jon Rosenberg (shown here with the most patient woman in the world). The moment was tense, but then they all laughed like at the end of an episode of Super Friends.

Also, because I love you people so, please enjoy this podcast of the interview Scott did on launch day with Leonard Lopate of WNYC in New York. A little on the short side, but it’ll tide us over until Sky can get her computer fixed and mix up some Winterviews.

Speaking of Sky, you may have heard that she’s looking to get signatures from as many artists whose work is excerpted in Making Comics as possible. At the end of the tour, she’s donating the book to the CBLDF for auction, so if you’re an artist who might be in the book (and there’s about 50 webcomics artists represented on page 200 alone!), be sure to offer to sign. And if you’re not one of those artists, go to the signings anyway — you won’t find a smarter, more humble, gracious guy in comics than Scott McCloud, and you can tell him I said so.

T-Minus 07:55:37

Hey, where are you gonna be in, oh, eight hours or so? If you’re anywhere near New York City, and you don’t feel like dealing with the vast crowds of contrived hipsters, smelling of too much money and other people’s effort, get over to Midtown Comics Times Square location. From 5:00 to 7:00 this evening, Scott McCloud and family will be holding court, with a signing of Making Comics; I got my copy yesterday and I’ve started my first pass; initial impressions are that it’s brilliant (but be honest, we all suspected that).

McCloud has promised that every signing he does eventually turns into a Q&A session, so no worries if you missed last night’s event at SVA. Come early, stay late, and let the man know that you appreciate his work. Word is you might be able to congratulate Rich Stevens on his syndication deal, too.

Also, contrary to scurrilous lies told elsewhere, cupcakes are delicious.

On Syndication: An Interview With Rich Stevens

Editor’s note: R Stevens, creative madman behind Diesel Sweeties, is heading to the newspapers! There have been lots of questions in various places around the web about what this means for Stevens, for DS, and for webcomics in general. As part of Fleen’s continuing series on syndication vis-a-vis webcomics, we present the following interview with Stevens; it’s a bit lengthy, but the guy is just too quotable to edit to any measurable degree.

Fleen: Did United Feature Syndicate come to you, or did you submit a packet to them?

Stevens: It’s all Ted Rall. I knew him casually from being in one of the Attitude books he edited. He sent me an email saying I should contact him about a really important project, so I wrote him back and the penny dropped on my HEAD like a punch bowl full of hammers. I never thought I’d be suitable for something like this, so I never submitted on my own. Had I not been contacted by someone I already knew and trusted, I would have assumed the whole thing was a joke and not even replied.

Fleen: What’s the duration of your contract? What are your short- and medium-term goals for the strip?

Stevens: This is a five year mission, just like the original Enterprise. It ends and hopefully renews in 2012, just as the Mayan Calendar ends along with the universe itself.

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